Then the teacher proposed to write our own by using as a guide this poems we had already read.
So i wrote my own:
My mind was white,
My heart turned red
As soon as i looked back
And saw your face
From that moment onwards i need you
Like flowers need water to grow
I cant imagine my life
Without you by my side
No measure of time with you
Will be long enough
But we will start with forever
Although i know it is hard
Although i know we cant
Nice work Oli! I see you took John Clare´s idea of portraying how you felt the first time you saw your beloved one.
ResponderEliminarCongratulations on your result. You´ve come up with a lovely poem.
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